Floor plans - really need work, and there needs to be a connection between the section and the plans. Also - align the plans so that we can easily see the shifting of planes as the wave cuts the floor plans. The architectural stairs are a place holder for something great - this should be dynamic as your form. The fire stairs will become a tall rectangular form that penetrates your building (we will not see them). Maybe some of these floor planes step (or curve) back to allow one to see up or down to the next floor.
Rafael y agree with Jill´s perception, you have a very good approach and your models deserve what an architect with imagination, as you, needs to obtain the best note. More work, (curves and arches resemble the waves of the ocean)...(giving the feel of unión or fusión of the 2 elements, (nature and Urbanisation) in your case nature and interior design, take a second look of your floor plans, vertical circulation (stairs ) could make a big difference, transparency between floors, (Stairs should be dynamic as your form) Take a look at Armani`s in N.Y. and a second look on Dalian Library (organic architecture says a lot about your main idea. Great expectations on your work, keep on, hard work pays and you are walking the right path.
Floor plans - really need work, and there needs to be a connection between the section and the plans. Also - align the plans so that we can easily see the shifting of planes as the wave cuts the floor plans. The architectural stairs are a place holder for something great - this should be dynamic as your form. The fire stairs will become a tall rectangular form that penetrates your building (we will not see them). Maybe some of these floor planes step (or curve) back to allow one to see up or down to the next floor.
ReplyDeleteRafael y agree with Jill´s perception, you have a very good approach and your models deserve what an architect with imagination, as you, needs to obtain the best note. More work, (curves and arches resemble the waves of the ocean)...(giving the feel of unión or fusión of the 2 elements, (nature and Urbanisation) in your case nature and interior design, take a second look of your floor plans, vertical circulation (stairs ) could make a big difference, transparency between floors, (Stairs should be dynamic as your form) Take a look at Armani`s in N.Y. and a second look on Dalian Library (organic architecture says a lot about your main idea. Great expectations on your work, keep on, hard work pays and you are walking the right path.
ReplyDeleteIt has been a week since you posted these. I can't wait to see the plans and sections. I am hoping for the same dynamism as the the massing.
ReplyDeleteHappy thanksgiving